cutie face · 13d
Then pain flares around his cranium. It pings off the inside of his head like a racquetball from games Donghyuck used to play with the noblemen’s children, until it coalesces into one spot: the mating slit on his neck. He tries to sit up, shove Jaemin off of him, but boney knees dig into his sides. Donghyuck is stuck. His body no longer feels like it belongs to him."
THIS PASSAGE PLEASE
I’m assuming this is about the post I made for commentary on fics?? If that’s the case then I’ll be honest I blacked out during this fic. Literally rewrote in 10 different times before the words started coming out. My literal notes for this part of the fic are “jm eats hc’s ass then bites him like you’re mine now I won’t be a knight bc I’ll be a king” LMAO. But Haechan is completely out of it at this point, doesn’t really know what’s going on, but he registers that he’s in pain. He’s confused and hurt. The mating bond right after being knotted has him super weak.. I imagined he feels distant in a way. But there’s nothing he can do about it. He was claimed. I did this because Jaemin is supposed to be dangerous. He was taken and muzzled, and although he’s supposed to be punished here, he takes back the upper hand. And they’re stuck together now. Forever. Idk if this answer will satisfy you hahah this fic was kinda a blur for me but I ended up really liking it.
