pretty anonie 🌸 · 6h
Hi dearie. I’m new here. Do you mind reading my little fic of minwon and give me some constructive feedbacks please? I’m open to any suggestions or advice. I just love writing and minwon so I want to put my imagination out. Having feedbacks from a great writer like you would help me a lot 💜 I hope you’ll have a read at it and see if it’s okay, please 🥰 Thank you in advanced.
Hiiii thank you so much for considering me for this 🙏🏻 The respect is mutual, of course, and I'm so happy to see more and more authors joining our community! I read the fic and reallyyyy enjoyed it. The plot is very nice (I’m a little biased, I love canon-realistic minwon) your style flows so well, so come out of the anonymity and start posting with your name because you're GOOD!! 🙂↕️ Personally, I have only one things I would have adjusted in the fic. I would have moved the smut scene from the middle to the end, and I would have made it more romantic and emotional, so that it would have brought their troubled story to a perfect closure and give them a very nice happy ending 💜
