hi, maganda ang pagkakalahad ng story mo and i think the pacing was just right. i actually liked the flashbacks because they gave more cobtext to the characters and what was happening in the present. hindi siya feeling na nalilihis or nakaka-distract sa story for me—in fact, mas naging meaningful pa yung mga present scenes because of them... i love lui and emi so much, they deserve every good thing in da world. their family isn't perfect, but i think that's what makes them feel more real. also, i miss you bebe luichibog naming lahat.
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