Anonymous Coward · 1mo
When remastering Erosion how are you planning on implementing revisions/ writing new scenes you want expanded on? I'm reading the updated version and it's fantastic, so I would love to know more your process when you had a draft already. Do you write by intuition for what needs to be filled in after reading Erosion v. 1, or do you have a list of what to edit and expand more methodically, for ex.?
The thing with Erosion's remake is that it's... pretty much a completely different story from how it was originally. There are characters from the original like Brittney who still show, but then stuff like the overall mystery plot? All new, never in Erosion, so a lot of stuff here is just brand new. There are elements from Erosion V.1 that stay, like Brittney and Black Hole, but then other elements of their characters have changed substantially. I wanted to take some of the elements of what worked in Erosion and the (decanonized) sequel I'd started, and make it into something much better... higher scales, better characterization, etc. I do have a mental list of details and elements I wish to tackle though yes.
