Oh goodness I feared the day I’d get this question! im not sure if I have tips bc im still not as confident as id like to be about it 😖 I think reading smut you like and asking yourself “what do I like about it?” helps you think about form. For instance I think my earlier fics were really wordy and overly descriptive in smut scenes and I later learned that short sentences can be just as effective (and this applies to non-smut scenes as well). But honestly it could also be that my taste/preferences have changed over the years… another tip is - it’s kind of basic but - use all 5 senses. Describe things that the main character feels/senses between sentences that give action. It helps it feel less like a screenplay with acting directions lol

Wow this is making me realize I haven’t written in 84yrs 😭😅 thank you for loving my writing it means a lot